Cocoa Butter Kisses Dual Review: Books 1 and 2: This Ain't It Chief

Cocoa Butter Kisses by A. Nicole
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Sometimes in life, we tend to do things we say we'd never do. That's exactly what happened with Ava. 
Working for an arrogant, cocky man can be tough sometimes, but once they cross a line that should've never been crossed, that only causes things to get tougher. 

Ava will quickly come to her senses but there's just something about Roman that she's drawn to. Will Ava continue crossing those lines, or is her job more important?

Cocoa Butter Kisses by A. Nicole
Add to Your Goodreads

Buy it on Amazon

Sometimes in life, we tend to do things we say we'd never do. That's exactly what happened with Ava. 
Working for an arrogant, cocky man can be tough sometimes, but once they cross a line that should've never been crossed, that only causes things to get tougher. 

Ava will quickly come to her senses but there's just something about Roman that she's drawn to. Will Ava continue crossing those lines, or is her job more important?

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BOOK ONE

The gorgeous cover of Cocoa Butter Kisses though sensual is a cover for a story that is 
more vulgar than sexy. 

To make a short story shorter, the blurb gives the book more depth than it actually 

contained. I hadn’t even realized this story was under 50 pages, otherwise, I would have

passed. It’s very difficult to capture a story of the caliber the blurb implies in such a short 

space of time. 

Ava works at a tattoo shop with a mouthy arrogant boss—and though I like men with a 

little attitude in my books, Roman’s attitude toed the line of disrespectful a little too 

closely. Let’s be real, he crossed the line—and had no intention of turning back. 

With pick up lines that shouldn’t work on anyone, he pulled Ava into a work relationship 

she didn’t really want. Good looks and good D won her over. While that’s far from 

unrealistic it was just a bit much for me.

Everything happened so fast, the lingo felt dated and Roman was an asshole who deemed

 her unladylike due to her smoking habit—which is a bad habit obviously but his position

 felt more like an attack than an observation from a man who claims to be “feeling her.”

Not to mention his stances were critical and not in a way that would tempt even the

“baddest” of girls. Mentions of her lips looking ready to suck a penis, and the mention of 

them being a God-given penis sucking machine rubbed me every way but right. 

With more time, time to let the reader come to grips with the budding relationship, time to

allow the reader to understand Ava’s tough lifestyle—and just more development would 

have made this serial-style novelette more appealing. 

BOOK TWO

Book two was better. However, it maintained the same lack of depth and meaningless, 

passionless sex that we encountered in book one.

Though the writing seemed to catch up to what was expected, the characters seemed clueless to the other’s needs which resulted in a lot of sex that only served to cover the many issues that lurked beneath

  the surface of their relationship not relationship. 

There’s a lack of respect from Roman towards Ava—the argument about not using condoms made me cringe and would send any woman with an iota of common sense running for the hills. 

This book would have better served its purpose as one lengthy novel—but if sex on

repeat and dramatic climactic-less endings are your thing, Cocoa butter kisses will satisfy 

your every need.